The land of historic pride
is submerged in the big tide
but not legendary pages
humble mouths of powerful sages
washing our blood in sinful waves
tearfully apart from the Mother who saves
into the vivid eternal doors of gold
obscure from the land well told ...
I am not rude but dear,what does that mean?. Nothing on your poem truly relates to the mystical soul!
ReplyDeletewell its not about soul..its about a soul's departure from earth through the sinful waves...
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